“Feet in Smoke: A Story About Electrified Near-Death” by
John Jeremiah Sullivan
Author John Jeremiah Sullivan frequently contributes his
works to The New York Times Magazine,
alongside editing for Harper’s Magazine
and The Paris Review. His pieces have
won several awards, including the Eclipse Award, the National Magazine Award,
and the Whiting Award. This specific memoir is about Sullivan’s brother’s brush
with death. Sullivan utilizes anecdote and vivid imagery to prove the
importance of his brother, Worth, to him, and the horrifying ease with which
death can taunt life. Primarily, Sullivan describes his relationship with his
brother through a story about him sneaking into Worth’s room to listen to
music, even though his older brother had forbid it. Sullivan proved through
this story that, since his brother is seven years older, they were not always
very close. That is, until they were able to share their love of music.
Additionally, Sullivan uses descriptive imagery when he writes about the day
his brother was dangerously electrocuted. He states that, before singing the
opening lines of Sullivan’s favorite song, “a surge of electricity arced
through his body, magnetizing the mike to his chest like a tiny but obstinate
missile, searing the first string and fret into his palm, and stopping his
heart. He fell backward and crashed, already dying” (Sullivan). The diction of
this specific quote creates a horrible image in the minds of the audience: the
crippling picture of a man seemingly struck by lightning, collapsing after
being stung by the current. The combination of the brotherly anecdote and the
vivid imagery appeal to the emotions of the readers. The story causes the
audience to imagine their family members, and to remember the times when they
truly felt connected and like family. The following image of the near death
experience, though, shatters these happy thoughts with the fear most people
have: losing a family member. The brutal and abrupt diction utilized
immediately following a touching story shows the readers the shock that
Sullivan felt in the moment he heard of his brother’s condition, and how it
affected him so negatively, proving his love for his brother, and how death can
appear in an instant.